I agree with Rob, + to expand I think the problem lies with there being two trees of equal weight placed symmetrically, so that they're competing for attention. An odd number would have worked well here, e.g. if you had just one of the main trees in the frame (but not in the centre), or otherwise three of them would have been good too, but two just splits the frame in half. I like the viewpoint you chose, i.e. looking up, so well done for that approach
Good attempt at something different, sawdust
