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Old 26-01-2007, 10:20   #4 (permalink)
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Re: First attempt at something decent - Nut at Sunderland Uni

I like the nut, it's also a little wonky but what's a little between friends. If there was one thing I might suggest to improve it then it would be to have stood slightly to one side, so that the nearest of the lamposts through the hole in the nut wasn't in view. You got a good angle on the nut though, I like the way the light and shadow work.

As well as straightening the second, I'd chop a big chunk off the bottom so only the top row of tiles from the plinth were showing.

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Dan
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