[Rob Barron]

I like this picturre Mala, it has some interesting compositional lines leading our eyes in to the one bit that really makes this picture: the figure just about to walk past the house. Without him the picture is static but with that person the image takes on a story. The curves from the left lead to him and the path from the right lead to him so we can't fail to notice him.

Technically the lighting is a bit flat. You have exposed for the dark areas under the bridge but this has led to the sky being completely over-exposed. By the lack of storng shadows we can see that it was a pretty flat grey day anyway so you couldn't do an awful lot about it but it does leave us with a rather large area top right that is somewhat flat.

But I like it for the composition so well done, a good image to choose for your first critique. looking forward to seeing more in the future.

Cheers,
Rob