I really think the edited line out shot is terrific.
The scrum shot seems a bit in between. It is either too tight or not tight enough.
I like the shot of the kicker. One gets a good feel for the power of the kick with the blurred ball and foot, but I agree with Rob, he needs a bit more space. It seems like he is kicking the ball into the frame
However, your action shots are some of the best I have seen.
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