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Old 01-02-2007, 00:06   #2 (permalink)
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Re: cyclist

O.k,

Mono processing, i am no expert, but i would say that this looks pretty good. The lighting in the image is certainly very good, which shows a good exposure. So technically very good. (now your practicing for the next round of the monthly comp.)
The big problem i have with this image is that the cyclist is very central. This is a big shame, because i am struggling to find a better crop, especially enough of a crop to move the cyclist out of the centre. The problems i'm having are, on the left.. i feel the leadin wall that is lit is necessary, and on the left the graffiti provides a good additional feature (maybe you could lose a little of it, but not enough). Possibly a little could be lost at the top, but not from the bottom.

To keep it simple i am struggling to find a better composition than you have already done, which is a shame as i feel it needs something slightly different!

As it stands though it is a good image!
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