Beautiful girl, beautiful pose, beautifully taken.... but I can't see why a girl would stand in a pink bikini looking so deadly serious! The rest is lovely though I agree there is too much make up, especially the pink blusher. I think I would remove the mole/spot just near the bow on her bikini bottoms. I know it's there but it doesn't need to be
You haven't done much wrong here David, that's for sure
Cheers,
Rob