I rather like this one Fi
is it a processed daylight shot or did you creep up on it in the dark?
I'm guessing from the shadows on the branches and the even light up the tree and in the background that is a daylight shot.
I like the effect, but not knowing how much room you had makes it difficult to comment on the composition. The low branch going out of shot to the right could be trimmed and the vignette would hide the trimmed end.
I think it's better than the tree in front of the church anyway!