[Rob Barron]

If the original had had just a couple of razor sharp geese in it, I would have loved the image. As it is I like it (sorry to go against the grain on this one) because it has a sense of action rather than a static group of birds. Sharp birds about a third of the way in would have given us the focal point and the rest would have been superb.

So you really weren't far away from a cracking shot. Good idea to capture it so well done.

Cheers,
Rob