Hi David
Dang, man, how do you get such great models????
I like the general composition, the angle of her arm and back, and the subtle angle that her face makes, but I have some compositional problems with her arms. It looks like her right hand is someone else's, coming from nowhere, grabbing at her breast. This is always a problem with the arm farthest from the camera. The pose has to show some connection of the arm to the subject.
And she looks like she is pulling her breast rather than gently resting her hand on it.
Her left arm is cut off below the elbow. This is not terrible here, but as a general rule, never cut off arms or legs below the joint. It looks amputated then. As I said, though, it is not bad here.
There is a distracting dark shadow under her right eye.
And the moles. This is always a problem for me. In general, they are part of the model, and I hesitate to photoshop them for that reason, so I usually ask the model if she wants them removed. A little local anesthetic, a sharp blade and a bandaid usually does the job
Finally, this is a nice soft photo, but I personally would like to see a bit more light shadow to make Suz more 3 dimensional.
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