[skipper954]

Hi Afterlife

Did you take the mono in camera or convert post processing? Big difference. I, for one, never let the cam process for me. I am a control freak.

I like the comoposition. The eye is drawn to the end of the river because of the rh hill and the river itself.

However, there are several things that you could improve.

The people on the left bank could be cloned out.

The hill on the right is a bit dark. There is detail in the shadows, I am sure.

The sky is a bit light, and not very interesting. I think there is detail there, too, that can be brought out.

Landscapes in mono are particularly difficult because there is not a great deal of tonal range in the greens. But here, between the river, hill and sky, I think that you could have a winner.

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