Great set Stepheno
#1 is my favourite, I like this one a lot.
#2 is too confused for my taste. You've got equal focus on everything from front to back, which doesn't look right in this shot somehow, it's got my eyes darting all over the place but not settling anywhere.
#3 needs rotating ever so slightly clockwise. This is a lovely shot, which Mark has really brought to life in his pimp.
#4 also needs rotating clockwise. Also a bit busy for my taste.
#5 I like, especially the symmetry which you got dead on.
Well done there, Stepheno