[Rob Barron]

Hmmm, very interesting idea here Fi. The high key approach isn't to everyone's taste but I am happy enough with it and this subject works fine. The only thing I would say though is that when doing anything like High Key or other work that leaves things that are less detailed, it is important that the viewer can get a good idea for what things are. There is a part in the white area above the central line of bullets that looks undefinable. It looks like an old TV aerial but I have a feeling it is a rouch sawn piece of wood and that is the end of it, could be wrong.

I'd like the bullet chain to be at a greater angle to make it a touch more dynamic, maybe from bottom right to top left.

I like the idea you have played with here and I think with some refining could make a powerful image. Keep up the playing as you always seem to come up with something of merit when you experiment!

Cheers,
Rob