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Old 01-05-2007, 13:46   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Pearly Tears

Hi Don + to pixalo.

You've captured the lovely colours + shapes of these pretty leaves

Since you've placed your image in the critique section, I assume you're after constructive criticism ... very brave for your first post so here goes :

Although your title is "Pearly Tears" I can only see one droplet, but I can't see it very well because it's obstructed by a leaf. The droplet looks nice + sharp, but I would've liked to see it perhaps from a slightly higher viewpoint, so it's all in view.

You have a very shallow DoF here so that not much of the foreground leaves is in focus, which I would like them to be.

Your composition is interesting, but you have a lot of "dead space" on the left side of the frame which is not contributing to the image, so I would crop that out.

I love the bokeh - the out of focus leaves + background - which has pleasingly subtle colours, although the black patch is a bit distracting.

Those are my thoughts on the image, others may view it differently.

Good first post Don, hope to see more soon
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