Not bad David, but a few things that bother me here :
1) I think the soft focus is a bit much, + I'm not sure soft focus works at all for guys ... aren't they s'posed to be rugged, not soft
2) Agree that the pic needs straightening.
3) The composition seems unbalanced to me. The model is central on the horizontal but not vertically. I think it's a bit tightly cropped at the bottom + too much space at the top. With him being central (on the horizontal) + the window being top left, there's a lot of dead space on the RHS. I realise this follows the rule of the model having space to look into, but it does make the image seem unbalanced to me.
4) The model has a dreamy non-masculine look about him, which makes him not my type, so I'm not drooling over this one I'm afraid
Thanks for posting one for the girls, let's see some more
