I like this one better than the last one David
I guess some will not like the gradient on the background, but for me it does not detract due to the focus being spot-on. That's the problem with the great outdoors - you don't have full control of everything as you would in a studio. The plus side, of course is the variation that you can achieve.
She is connecting well and looks confident and comfortable, but is there a blemish on her cheek?