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**Markulous** · 29-07-2007, 08:19

There is a degree of mystery and the comp works well to lead you there but I think it needs one more item of interest - a sunset, dramatic sky, patch of light, etc to achieve what you're aiming. Think it could lose the top (down to the cloud) and the saturation is just a touch too much. The elements you have work well - just needs that little bit extra!

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Markulous Pixalo Crew Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Peak District Posts: 10,070	Re: The road to ..... There is a degree of mystery and the comp works well to lead you there but I think it needs one more item of interest - a sunset, dramatic sky, patch of light, etc to achieve what you're aiming. Think it could lose the top (down to the cloud) and the saturation is just a touch too much. The elements you have work well - just needs that little bit extra!