I think you've done a great job here Sweet_sac. The only bit I think could be improved a touch further is the iris and pupil of her eyes. In the mono they have melded into each other so much that we don't see much separation. It is making her eyes look too dark. If you lighten the iris a touch I think it will make it stronger.
The rest is great and she definitely has no reason to hide from the camera. Tell her from us we said that... but then again maybe you'd better not or you'll get killed for showing it to us in the first place!
Cheers,
Rob