Hi Dave
So happy to see that you are getting in to studio shooting with models. It is so rewarding and you get a ton of posing ideas from the other photographers.
Agree here with the elbow. I do like the softness. As a general rule, angles are important. Bend every joint and create angles with the head and body to make the image interesting.
Can't say much negative about this or your Lisa picture, but it is time to decenter some
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