[fionaB]

a good set for your first go at people.
the first two i feel would have been better with them making eye contact witht he camera as there is no bond there between subject and viewer.
#3 is nice, with ust the shadow on her face spoiling it for me,( pity your reflectors hadnt appeared this would have benefited from having them.
I like the fun element of the last one, just slightly overexposed, which should be easily sorted in PS if you shot in RAW.

well done a great start.

Fi
# 4 and 5 are nice with good eye contact, 5 i think perhaps a faste shutter speed would have frozen it a bit more.