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Old 22-12-2007, 17:51   #6 (permalink)
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Re: Portrait

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Originally Posted by Dabhand16 View Post
I like it

I'm sure you (and she) are very pleased with this.

Maybe a bit tight on the crop - could you include all of the eyebrow and chin + remove the reflection from the white of her eye?

Minor things, though - very well done.
Thanks Graham, I think she liked it! I was a little concerned about the tightness of the shot (not a crop, as I was using the 90mm) but I think it sorta works for this one

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Like the tight crop ...for 1st go sickenly good.... stop now !!!
LOL thanks Dave, and, er....no!
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Originally Posted by brian wright22 View Post
Brilliant and not much wrong here Jack. For me though I would like the left hand side of her hair to be a bit more in focus so that it looked less like a shadow on the background. Or perhaps it is the shadow on the background ?
Its still very good in my books.
Brian
Thanks Brian, yes it is her hair, and I probably should've used a slightly narrower aperture to get more in focus, I see what you mean about it looking like a shadow. Thanks for the comments

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Originally Posted by orangepeel View Post
pretty damn good. I like the crop.
the only, minor, crit would be the eyes are a tad soft. works well for the rest of it tho.
Not sure about this OP, they don't look soft on the original (at least not IMO), but I'm glad you liked it anyway


Thanks for all the kind comments! (would still welcome any more takers, though )
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