I think the pose and her look is good, I just don't go much on the blurring which is a bit too strong for my taste. Interesting idea and I must say it is sort of growing on me as I look at it more so give it a week and maybe I'll love it
Lovely lass, she's got a natural look that I far prefer to these over-made-up models we see too much of.
Cheers,
Rob