As the first shot came up Roger, I could only see down to an inch above the bottom of the sht and I thought it looked great. Then I scrolled the screen up and saw the extra bit and just thought 'What's that there for?' Definitely wants getting rid of as it adds nothing to the shot and distracts the attention from where it should be. Take that off and you've got a terrific sht there
I love the feel of the 2nd one but again would crop an inch off the left. Keep the wall but not the first part of it. It's got a tremendous blurriness to it which really works great in this shot.
Lovely work so grab the cropper ... better than coming one like the guy in that second shot LOL
Cheers,
Rob