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Re: 1st critique shot...
A good effort. Cropped heads don't do it for me unless you crop in very close to the eyes. Flat heads just don't look right. The pose is good but even better would be the eyes looking at the camera and the nose is lost in the contour of the cheek. Worth cloning the stray hairs above the left (baby's right) eye. Nice soft tones. But this is opportunist and sometimes you get what you can.
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