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Old 26-04-2008, 22:35   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Mum's Strike Day

Nellie, technically - exposure, focus, Dof, colours - it's very good

Composition looks like an accidental discharge (the camera went off by mistake). Question: What was the reason for taking this shot? What does it mean/say to you? TBH it doesn't mean or say much to me, except that someone wearing boots + jeans is sitting down on some stones + probably sporting an aching bottom

Point being, the subject matter is, shall we say, mundane, and it would take a very creative approach to make a shot like this work.

Sorry if my comment sounds harsh, I mean it in a helpful way

EDIT: Ok I've commented as if you took the shot. I have no idea how old your daughter is or how much experience she has had with photography.
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