well at the end of the day you asked for critique both technically and contextually, we say it as we see it here for the most part, I made the comment about what you wanted to hear as i wasnt sure what you were after but what i went on to say was not geared towards what i thought u wanted to hear...........not sure if that makes sense but it did when i said it to myself......... anyway, if you post something for critique its always going to happen that you get some comments that you would rather not hear....... it happens to each and everyone of us.
I think perhaps if you were more clear in what you wanted from people then you would get more definitive answers, after all, you did only ask for " honest feedback both technically and contextually", which is what you got.
Fi