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Old 09-10-2005, 20:32   #14 (permalink)
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With reference to your CV.

I personally think the different font sizes for the title and your name are either the wrong way around or preferably should be the same with maybe a slight emphasis on your name through brightness, subtle colouration (maybe the same as the graphic - may make sense to make it an image to ensure it always looks right).

I would call Photoshop is an application rather than a program.

'About you' section needs to be a sales pitch rather than a statement of fact. Include something about being able to work as part of a team as well as on your own. Motivated/self starter etc etc.

The next section should be key achievements or maybe move up the photography experience to here and rename Professional Phototgraphy Experience or similar.

Although not relevant to the role, you should include some employment history (assuming you have some) as it shows you are reliable, able to hold down a job etc.

I personally think that references should only be included at this stage if the names are widely recognisable ie name dropping. Otherwise leave them out until asked.

Do you think the sample images adequately show the range of your capabilities or will you tailor them depending on the role applied for? I think the quantity chosen is correct though.

Generally I like the overall style, clear, easy to read, relatively brief. You just need to sell yourself a bit more e.g. well versed in Photoshop should be very experienced in Photoshop or something similar.

Good luck

Mark
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