Yes you have an eye for a photograph, you just need a little help with putting the finishing touches to your images. Again a little sharpening, some contrast adjutments and a crop to help the picture conform to the "Rule of Thirds" will mage a massive difference to this shot.
As I was working with your low resolution file thats the best I could do but you should be able to manage a better result.
for more information on "Rule of Thirds" have a look
here