The first shot I would have used a square crop on to remove some of the space and draw you into to the performance, it would make it even more involving.
The second is good too, just overshadowed by the first for me although it is slightly sharper.
Mr Swan has been a bit over sharpened..you have the halo around the front of the beak. Also by looking down on him from that angle you have got a completely black eye, if you had lowered your perspective the light from the sky may have given it a catch light?
Forth is a screamer for next years Christmas card but the large bright blue patch is distracting me slightly, knowing your PS skills though, that’s a minor issue for you to solve
The last doesn’t do a great deal for me I’m afraid, its ok but you have shown many that are much better here.
Hope that helps
