I think I may re-shoot this one tonight, slightly tighter crop and have some fiddles with the point of focus. It's not like I've got walk far now, is it?
In reply to your comments....
Ven, I was just unsure as to whether or not it worked with the PoF where it is, I was thinking it probably should've been nearer the front. Something about it is just a little uncomfortable to my eye. Probably the heat
And no, nothing melted. +3 Cokin closeup filter @ 400mm+
Mini, Just try thinking of something banal and ordinary and see what ideas you can come up with to make it look attractive or photogenic. Or, as I prefer to do, neck a bottle or two of wine and wander round the house pointing (it) at random stuff and see what comes out