[stepheno]

It's a lovely shot davey, of two very personable girls. You've caught their mood and relationship perfectly (the holding hands is excellent) and the colour is great. Now the downside - only one, the blurring is very obvious around the outline of the girls and is not a natural effect. I'd be interested why you felt you needed to do it. Also maybe a graduated blurring from back to front or make it look deliberate by creating a vignette?

Edit - after looking again the vignette isn't a good idea unless it's a crop and you have a full image to work on.