Thank you all for your comments.
Re: the missing foot - I frequently take a small ladder on inside shoots to get a different angle. I was at the top, standing on tiptoes to try to get everything in the frame, and just missed the foot.
Re: harshness of second image. I agree. Too much sharpening and the pillow highlight is offputting. Fortunately, I save my images as PSD's, so I don't have to go back to the raw image and start over. All of my layers are still there. So I unsharpened, undid my previous levels and reapplied them. I like this better. The softness of the image matches her feelings now.
Thanks again