I have looked at this several time over the last two days and each time I felt there was something just not right. The exposure is great, the lighting on the subject, the focus, the colour etc all seemed right yet there was still something.
After playing in PS it hit me that it was the 'dirty/uneven' floor and the shadow to the back right of Destiny. Here is my altered version to show what I mean. I have not gone completely black with it (although I think a it would tolerate being a little darker) if that was your choice. I am sure that you will be able to work out what I did to alter it so I won't go into that here
You may or may not see this as an improvement
