[VeddieEdder]

I'd suggest you take some time and energy to study some "classic" poses of your particular style of photography. The lighting you achieve is for the most part good, but as I've watched your posts, most of your subjects look either/and unnatural/uncomfortable. Some may feel as though they are "copying" when doing this, but imitation is the best form of flattery.

This particular image, the pose makes me uncomfortable as the viewer, thus I can fully understand the amount of unease that comes through in her facial expression. If I'm uncomfortable, she's got to be double that. Keep at it tho!