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Old 06-12-2012, 12:49   #1 (permalink)
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I booked the same model that Dabhand has been using recently and these are some of my efforts











I hope you like them.
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Old 06-12-2012, 14:39   #2 (permalink)
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Nice set Steve

My only nits are that the lighting in #3 has given her a bit of 'panda eyes', #2 I like the concept and this one is my favourite - but I think that maybe having one light turned own a little or using clamshell lighting might have improved it. It is OK as it is, but I find the shadows on either side of her nose a little odd - or maybe it is just the shadow on the RHS of her nose as viewed. I dunno. There is just something that is niggling me. The stool in the last one is wonky!

The BG works well though and overall a very nice set with a mix of poses What did you use to smooth her skin?
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Some nice shots and can't realy compare them to Grahams as they have a difrent style
and feel.
#2 The blusher line down her face is a bit distracting and #3 The light levels seen
a bit unbalances

I realy love #4. Tansy knows how to preform to the camera.

Nice work.
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Some great shots there! Love the first two.

Hate the bright red text.
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totally different style lighting in #3 isnt great, and i would have a word with her MUA as her make up really needs to be sorted, i think i liked her better in the au naturale photos without the make up.
however i do like the fun aspect to them

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I shall speak to the mua, she is quite new and Im sure helpful advice would be gratefully accepted. The stool is indeed wonky in the last shot but I sort of liked it like that? Maybe Im just odd??!!
The red text is only on web sized images and is intended to get noticed, I dont want the images used without credit. Tansy does indeed know how to perform to the camera
The only post processing is Photoshop for levels/curves etc and on 2 and 3 a gentle touch of portrait pro
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#4 looks as thought she is letting you into her world a little and doesn't look staged as some of the other shots. Would say this is one of the best shot I have seen of her. Realy natrul.
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