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Ahhh! Nescafee
No floating heads or cups of java today.
I think I botched the sky ![]() ![]() |
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Re: Ahhh! Nescafee
Good compostion
Yes, the sky looks a bit fake (although you did a good job of blending it in, it doesn't seem to fit with the light falling on the ground, particularly the FG) + seems a bit busy, i.e. the clouds are lovely but are competing with the water for attention. I'd like the FG rocks to be sharp. Otherwise, I like it Edit: But looking at it again, I'm wondering if the only reason I thought the sky looks fake is 'cos you indicated that it's fake, i.e. you put the thought in my head + I felt obliged to figure out why it looks fake ![]()
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Re: Ahhh! Nescafee
Perhaps I need to learn when to shut up!
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Re: Ahhh! Nescafee
I quite like this. I guess that the "waterfall" was just a small rock but the view point you chose is very good.
I think that the sky looks OK. If you had not said anything I would have accepted it. I have seen (and created ) much worse new skies. Initially I thought that I agreed with C. that the foreground rocks should have been in focus. but the more I look at the picture the less "wrong" they seem. Perhaps a crop might help a bit . Finally I wish you had removed that stick on the right hand side and cloned the dead flower stalks in the top right.
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Re: Ahhh! Nescafee
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