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Old 05-04-2008, 14:38   #1 (permalink)
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I think I botched the sky

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Old 05-04-2008, 15:02   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Ahhh! Nescafee

Good compostion

Yes, the sky looks a bit fake (although you did a good job of blending it in, it doesn't seem to fit with the light falling on the ground, particularly the FG) + seems a bit busy, i.e. the clouds are lovely but are competing with the water for attention.

I'd like the FG rocks to be sharp.

Otherwise, I like it Particularly the splashing water, it looks so cool + refreshing.

Edit: But looking at it again, I'm wondering if the only reason I thought the sky looks fake is 'cos you indicated that it's fake, i.e. you put the thought in my head + I felt obliged to figure out why it looks fake
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Re: Ahhh! Nescafee

Perhaps I need to learn when to shut up!
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Re: Ahhh! Nescafee

I quite like this. I guess that the "waterfall" was just a small rock but the view point you chose is very good.

I think that the sky looks OK. If you had not said anything I would have accepted it. I have seen (and created ) much worse new skies.

Initially I thought that I agreed with C. that the foreground rocks should have been in focus. but the more I look at the picture the less "wrong" they seem. Perhaps a crop might help a bit .

Finally I wish you had removed that stick on the right hand side and cloned the dead flower stalks in the top right.
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Re: Ahhh! Nescafee

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Initially I thought that I agreed with C. that the foreground rocks should have been in focus. but the more I look at the picture the less "wrong" they seem. Perhaps a crop might help a bit
I pondered on that point as well AQ + have now decided that I'd like just the very front ones to be blurred (to add to the perspective) but for most of the rocks to be sharp.

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Re: Ahhh! Nescafee

I had hoped the stick would not get noticed,

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Look round the viewfinder.
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