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25-04-2007, 01:48
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another one of Nikki
as the title says, Thanks David
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25-04-2007, 19:37
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Re: another one of Nikki
I like this better than the last just the highlight on the 7 step draws my eye a bit but then so do other bits
 sorry I have not commented on others but I have been busy at work of late |
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25-04-2007, 19:46
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Re: another one of Nikki
IMO I always think your pictures are every bit as good as what I see in magazines
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25-04-2007, 19:48
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Re: another one of Nikki
i like this better than the last one
It is better lit and more dynamic. I think the concept of the last one was good, it just did not seem to hang together.One thing this one does have in common with the last is the expression on her face. It looks like she is about to have a nasty accident if you don't get a move on, and it might be an idea to encourage your models in at least some of the shots you do to just laugh or look happy/surprised/amused, or just anything except like this 'am I bovverd?'
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27-04-2007, 15:13
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Re: another one of Nikki
Hi David
There is something a bit unsettling about this one, and I think that it is the tilt of the steps. Now maybe that is a good thing because it causes pauses. Also I would dearly like to see Nikki is a different pose so that you could offcenter her. Would that create a different efffect, and would it be better? I dunno. As always, I love your lighting and sharp focus. BTW, could you tell me a bit about your usual lighting setup? Thanks skip |
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27-04-2007, 18:04
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Re: another one of Nikki
I agree with Skip about the tilt, it is distracting so I have just made a small adjustment to straighten the steps up. The rest works well.
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27-04-2007, 22:35
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Re: another one of Nikki
Didn't comment on this shot initially because I didn't like it but wasn't sure why - now I know and Rob's straightening did the trick. Other than her bored facial expression - great shot.
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27-04-2007, 23:55
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Re: another one of Nikki
Problem is Skip she aint sitting on an ashtray.
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28-04-2007, 04:07
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Re: another one of Nikki
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 Charlotte, Angela, Fi and Sue would love that Last edited by skipper954 : 28-04-2007 at 14:38. |
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