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Join Date: Nov 2006
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Another one taken today
Do i take and post too many shots of my son or what! maybe i should get out more
![]() Anyway feedback appreciated ![]()
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Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: Corfe Mullen, Wimborne, Dorset
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Re: Another one taken today
That's a cracking portrait Terry, you've capture your boys eyes superbly. Well Done
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Join Date: Dec 2006
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Re: Another one taken today
One can never take/show too many shots of our kids, Terry
![]() However, since this is in the critique thread, I'll point out the areas I feel could be improved: As I've mentioned in your previous pic, I'd like to see a bit more DoF to include his ears in the zone of sharp focus. The top of the pic, including the top of his head, is very dark, which is made more noticeable by the contrasting pale area of the BG. There are things sticking into/out of his head either side These are obviously BG objects, but I would clone them out.I'm distracted by the green stripes in his T-shirt + would suggest desaturating those small areas. Aside from those nit-picks, it's a good image, with his eyes nice + clear + sharp ... and at last I can see the colour of his eyes ![]() The exposure is good, as is the lighting, except for a brown band across the bridge of his nose + down his nose, + can't tell what causing that. HTH
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