B&W

ftmftm · 06-09-2007, 22:07

Done this with Lo yesterday, she liked it and so did i, a great girl and very easy to work with. David

dogdots · 08-09-2007, 04:25

I have a problem with the right side background being kinda beige in color. It's a little distracting to look at. In fact when I first saw the picture that is where my eyes were drawn to. I think it would look good with the background being the same on both sides of the pretty lady

Otherwise I think with the lines of the swimsuit and the way she is holding her arms makes for a good pose. It is a swimsuit right?

Rob Barron · 10-09-2007, 16:47

Most of this I like, just not the half showing tattoo under the left side of the brapiece. It is clashing a bit with the clean diagonals of the black and white pattern.

Other than that it works fine, nice work.

Cheers,
Rob

skipper954 · 04-10-2007, 18:11

Good pose and angles. Agree with the tat comment. Perhaps there could be a bit larger tonal range though, without appearing too contrasty.

skip

06-09-2007, 22:07	#1 (permalink)
ftmftm Getting Comfy Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Sunderland Posts: 248	B&W Done this with Lo yesterday, she liked it and so did i, a great girl and very easy to work with. David

08-09-2007, 04:25	#2 (permalink)
dogdots Forum Regular Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: North Dakota Posts: 576	Re: B&W I have a problem with the right side background being kinda beige in color. It's a little distracting to look at. In fact when I first saw the picture that is where my eyes were drawn to. I think it would look good with the background being the same on both sides of the pretty lady Otherwise I think with the lines of the swimsuit and the way she is holding her arms makes for a good pose. It is a swimsuit right?

10-09-2007, 16:47	#3 (permalink)
Rob Barron Loves the place Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Poole, Dorset Posts: 5,204	Re: B&W Most of this I like, just not the half showing tattoo under the left side of the brapiece. It is clashing a bit with the clean diagonals of the black and white pattern. Other than that it works fine, nice work. Cheers, Rob

04-10-2007, 18:11	#4 (permalink)
skipper954 Feet under the table Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Southeast Florida USA Posts: 1,721	Re: B&W Good pose and angles. Agree with the tat comment. Perhaps there could be a bit larger tonal range though, without appearing too contrasty. skip

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