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Old 09-07-2007, 19:47   #1 (permalink)
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This shot was taken just before the fight Lighting was poor so a bit moody I said

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Old 14-07-2007, 22:45   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Before the Fight

If you can adjust the exposure, it would be an outstanding image, capturing the feeling.

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Old 15-07-2007, 01:44   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Before the Fight

I like it, you can clearly see the tension in his face, and the moody underexposure + spot lights in the BG really emphasise the before-fight build up. I like the low viewpoint you chose, with the glove being prominent in the FG, it really gives a sense of being in the ring. Excellent work sawdust

As a variation, I would've liked to see a bit of the crowd in the BG, just to add to the sense of anticipation + excitement of the impending fight
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Old 15-07-2007, 19:17   #4 (permalink)
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Great shot........... Like the direction of the lighting. Yeah, it could be lighter but you're the artist and this is your work. So, well done.

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Old 21-07-2007, 17:06   #5 (permalink)
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Re: Before the Fight

thank all Ilike this one and will take another look a it sorry about the late reply (hols)
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Old 21-07-2007, 19:08   #6 (permalink)
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Re: Before the Fight

Cracking shot !!!! Can't fault the shot taking into account the difficult lighting.

I can offer a few post processing tweaks though
Wanted to draw attention to face more, so used OMNI lighting filter (Filters -> Render Lighting Effects ->Omni)
Made the OMNI circle width of shot & then dragged centre over face.
Using Layer - curves dragged upper part of line upwards to increase highlight. Changed blend mode to luminosity (to bring down saturation slightly)

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Old 21-07-2007, 19:17   #7 (permalink)
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Re: Before the Fight

Finally mono version from the above.
Converted using Channel mixers, RED 60% Green 40%.
Duplicated layer & then changed blend mode to "soft light" to get dark background

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Old 25-07-2007, 03:25   #8 (permalink)
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Re: Before the Fight

Excellent shot considering the conditions, and a great pimp by Dave to bring out it's potential... colour pimp is my favourite btw, the warmth of it makes the shot for me
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Old 25-07-2007, 04:48   #9 (permalink)
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A great shot I particularly like the mono, has great atmosphere, well done
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Old 26-07-2007, 06:18   #10 (permalink)
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great stuff , like the original and all the post processing work,you can learn a lot from this thread thanks
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Re: Before the Fight

I agree with Sonsey that Daves colour pimp is by far the best for graphic effect but not to take anything away from Sawdusts original i think the composition is excellent very well done i say!
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Re: Before the Fight

Thank you all for the comments on my comp and print there is more light on the face but thanks Dave for the mods.
(Still think a D200 would help )
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Old 02-08-2007, 11:57   #13 (permalink)
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I agree ...buy one now
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Old 07-08-2007, 13:16   #14 (permalink)
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This shot was taken just before the fight Lighting was poor so a bit moody I said

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A perfect perspective. Brilliant!

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