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Old 15-08-2007, 18:33   #1 (permalink)
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Another one of me sorry cant get a model until this weekend

just tell me where I have gone wrong and I can put it right Hope to sell it to keep kids away from the fire
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Old 15-08-2007, 18:40   #2 (permalink)
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It's very dark...
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Old 15-08-2007, 18:47   #3 (permalink)
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Yer that can be a problem on my comp its not to bad but on others its dark if more come in saying its dark I wil lighten it up
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Old 15-08-2007, 18:49   #4 (permalink)
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I think it's too dark also. You can barley make out the subject.
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Old 15-08-2007, 18:56   #5 (permalink)
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Good powerful image



Levels, cloned out highlight on forehead
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Old 15-08-2007, 19:06   #6 (permalink)
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Like I say looks ok on my monitor must get a calibration thingy

this looks to bright
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Markulous's is near spot on, so calibrate from that . Cracking shot, full of tension
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Had a go with this sawdust ... not easy considering it's only 41kb worth of image

All versions here seem to have a colour cast: Mark's has a yellow tinge, whilst yours has magnenta. Very difficult to correct that with such a small image file to work on, but I tried. What I did was mainly fiddley patching, e.g. cloned over the highlight on your tummy to try to flatten it for you Cloned over highlight on your nose. Brightened the whites of your eyes. Cloned over highlight on your L shoulder to tone it down + also the highlight on your forehead. Levels adjustment. Colour balance (this is all over the place, but can't do much about it with such a small file size, the colours just posterize even more). Cloned over the posterized highlight on your L glove.

After I uploaded I saw that there are now shapes in the BG but if you can ignore that ... well anyway, here's my pimp (still has a yellow cast but I gave up trying to fix it) :

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Re: Boxer

Yes thanks all (what do you meen flaten my tum ) I think I may need one of them things that hang over your monitor but as this is a old monitor pherhaps a new one may be needed
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