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Old 25-10-2007, 17:33   #1 (permalink)
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Hi. I need some comments about it. Thank you.
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Old 25-10-2007, 18:47   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Bridge Floor

I can see what you've gone for here Chihaw, the centralised, symmetrical approach. I think generally it has worked with a couple of small points you might like to consider:

At the far end of the bridge, there is a small white sign. This needs cloning out. Likewise on the right hand side there is the edge of a roof which is also bright and distracts the eye.

The other thing is that the eye is led through and along the bridge very successfully but when we get there we sort of eeel 'now what?' as there is nothing acting as a focal point.

Those things aside you have captured a pleasant image, well done

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Raising your viewpoint slightly might also have ctreated a more natural lead in. i.e. simulated eye level.
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Re: Bridge Floor

Like the approach here. I also would like to see a bit more of what is above the upper edge of the photo. This crop feels a bit tight.
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