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Old 07-02-2008, 20:40   #1 (permalink)
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I only started macro phorgraphy last summer, and would appreciate comments and criticism.

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Old 07-02-2008, 21:31   #2 (permalink)
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For a picture with this much detail, we really need to see a larger version in terms of filesize. This is 90kbs which is very small for a photo that is 800 pixels wide and the level of compression is pushing out the lovely detail in the butterfly and flowers.

Can we see a less compressed version Fred?

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Old 09-02-2008, 16:20   #3 (permalink)
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I changed the versions. Hope that its better.

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Old 09-02-2008, 16:43   #4 (permalink)
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Like this fred! Perhaps, if you can without losing too much detail, it would be worth cropping so that the flowers and the butterfly fill the frame?
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Nice photo here,i often wondered how you get these before they fly away is it hypnosis
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Fed, my I suggest you leave the original when you make a change so that people can comment on the difference? It will encourage more people to give you helpful feedback

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Fed, my I suggest you leave the original when you make a change so that people can comment on the difference? It will encourage more people to give you helpful feedback

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I know this isn't perfect and I hope you don't mind, but maybe something like this?

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Thank you all for your comments. I had already cropped it quite a bit, as Ray mentioned its not easy to get close to them. I guess I need a 100 mm macro...

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Fred , I find macro very hard mainly because the dof can be so narrow/small ( not sure of correct term here). The wings are nice and sharp but the eyes which are damn close to the wings are not. I also find white flowers incredibly difficult ,exposure can be a nightmare. Difficult subject here and I reckon you did good but my main nit would be eyes not sharp
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