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Loves the place
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Scotland
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church rehash
took robs advice on this pic and tried something different........ i do like it the more i look at it............ whats your opinions?
honest CnC as always pls.
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Join Date: Sep 2006
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Re: church rehash
I can't make up my mind about this, Fi.
On one hand it certainly brings out the window. On the other hand, at least on my screen, you have lost a lot of the richness of the midground wood that was in the original. And the duo tone portion looks flat, no lighter shades. I would really like to see wider tonal range there. skip |
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Loves the place
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Re: church rehash
I like your effort there Fi but I think it lacks contrast. I don't think it needs to be super punchy as that would take away from its tone but I think it just needs a bit of a lift. I have had a play and done four things:
~ Lifted the lighting a touch using a shallow S curve. ~ Copied window to new layer, adjusted with curves then used 'Overlay' blending mode at 70% ~ Lifted the lighting of the scouts flag on left ~ Lifted lighting on the Union Jack on the right. I felt the flags needed lifting along with the window as otherwise it felt unbalanced. Hope you like it. :o) Cheers, Rob
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Loves the place
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Re: church rehash
lovely Rob as always...... thanx
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