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20-06-2008, 22:14
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come on let me have it...be brutal
well for some reason not been getting much feedback of late..
 so thought i would put a shot in here to see where i am going wrong.. so go on folks rip me a new one..   md 
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21-06-2008, 00:05
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Re: come on let me have it...be brutal
It would score 9.99/10 if you'd included the right hand side of her face, and cloned out the dribble from her left nostril.
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21-06-2008, 00:59
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Re: come on let me have it...be brutal
I agree I don't think it adds anything cutting part of the face off
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21-06-2008, 09:09
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Re: come on let me have it...be brutal
agree with silky............. the nostril was the first thing i noticed unfortunately and it looks unbalanced with half her face missing,.
otherwise its lovely and sharp with a nice conneciton between subject and viewer Fi |
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21-06-2008, 12:17
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Re: come on let me have it...be brutal
Apart from the above, I'd prefer a more natural smile - it's looks just a little "OK, c'mon give us a smile" and the over the shoulder pose has made her head somewhat disproportionately larger
(Well, you did say 'brutal' )
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23-06-2008, 14:57
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Re: come on let me have it...be brutal
You have got to be kidding, why post this shot. She has the face and smile to take another. I have a grand daughter who looks somewhat like her,,,same age and she will act out a whole play for me if I ask her,,,have fun.
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23-06-2008, 15:06
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Re: come on let me have it...be brutal
Cut her little ear off
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24-06-2008, 19:50
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Re: come on let me have it...be brutal
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i can take as many as i like i have been trying different styles of cropping of late and was am after feedback... md 
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25-06-2008, 02:24
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Re: come on let me have it...be brutal
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27-06-2008, 19:23
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Re: come on let me have it...be brutal
I can ear that one, your right,, I would post another one and keep the ear this time,
If your really into cropping, maybe a fuller crop to bring out just the eyes and smile of your model. Even shoot her at a little more of an angle instead of straight up and only closing in on part of her head, then you could get away with one ear,,,have fun. |
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