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Old 12-04-2007, 22:30   #1 (permalink)
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I think I may have gotten it this time...Hope it works. This is my nephew, River, sittin on my fence bein a cowboy... what do you guys think?

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Old 12-04-2007, 22:35   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Cowboy

this is really nice, my only complaint is the the fence blocks out the horses face, this i think would have finished the image of beautifully! other than that its a lovely emotive image.

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Old 12-04-2007, 23:34   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Cowboy

I go along with that. A lower/closer viewpoint would have got the main areas of the horses in the gap in the fence. Their legs going behind the fence would have been less of a bother.
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Old 13-04-2007, 02:19   #4 (permalink)
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Old 13-04-2007, 07:25   #5 (permalink)
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Re: Cowboy

apart from agreeing with what has already been said , i would also remove the power line or what ever it is our left near top of tree ,and maybe try to one without your white frame and then with the frame ,feel it really needs horses face though. Look forward to seeing your next one, well done
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Old 13-04-2007, 08:48   #6 (permalink)
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Re: Cowboy

Agreeing with what has been said above, I do like the way you have managed to merge the jacket into the trees I think River, fence trees and sky work well.

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Old 14-04-2007, 03:52   #7 (permalink)
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Ayup (that's for Charlotte)
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Old 14-04-2007, 17:27   #8 (permalink)
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Re: Cowboy

I think the main problem has already been mentioned, the poor horse who has a white plank across his face. Ok, just thought I'd see if I could try and show what I think would improve the image overall. I cloned out the other horse and put a new one in but sorry, I didn't have a white horse in my collection so I had to go for a chestnut one (brown to you and me!) instead. I haven't matched it perfectly but that is mostly because the original is so heavily compressed (only 41kbs) that it made it hard to match my other image in. But you get the idea anyway and that is all I was trying to do.

I also lifted the jacket a bit so the guy didn't blend in quite so much with the trees. After all, his name is River, not Forest

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Old 14-04-2007, 17:49   #9 (permalink)
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I cloned out the other horse and put a new one in
Looks like you missed the top of the head of the original horse

A two headed horse looks a bit scary
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Old 14-04-2007, 18:34   #10 (permalink)
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Just wanted to see if you were paying attention iain

Thanks for noticing, I have changed it

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Old 14-04-2007, 19:21   #11 (permalink)
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Just wanted to see if you were paying attention iain

Thanks for noticing, I have changed it
Have to keep you on your toes!... much better
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Old 14-04-2007, 22:39   #12 (permalink)
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much better! but its actually a "bay" not a brown or a chestnut! lol.

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Old 14-04-2007, 23:07   #13 (permalink)
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wow Rob , thats brilliant .Still wish the power line top left wasnt there. I wiill be happy to master the basics on ps ,let alone what you have done to the pic Rob.Does look better with face of horse in.
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Old 15-04-2007, 22:53   #14 (permalink)
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Thanks, I definetly like it more when you can actually see the horses head...Thanks everyone!
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