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dandelion
This is my first 'studio' shot. Taken on the kitchen table on a sheet of black card, using natural light from the left with a white card to the right to spread the light.
Camera is a canon powershot pro1 at f8.0 and 1/8 on a tripod. Im not sure what other details are useful? but have details if needed ]
Last edited by Markulous; 06-03-2007 at 15:30. Reason: Linked to larger pic |
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Feet under the table
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Northamptonshire
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Re: dandelion
Hi there, it's difficult to critique at this size, could you post it at full size, ie 1000 pixels on the longest side and 200k file size.
Sarah Edit - Thats a better size, thanks Mark. Some nice details here & I see you've converted it to B&W. I think it would be better to have your subject further away from the background & use a wider apeture to lose the detail in it. Also crop a bit closer to the dandelion to get rid of the blank areas of the picture. I think I would have kept the colour in this as the splash of green on the stem would have given a bit of colour. Last edited by Whipspeed; 06-03-2007 at 16:42. |
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