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02-01-2008, 07:14
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Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: San Diego, Ca. Where the Surf meets the Turf
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Deep Sleep
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02-01-2008, 08:15
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Getting Comfy
Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Cheltenham, UK
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Re: Deep Sleep
There is a big white bit at the top of the picture. This needs to be darkened.
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02-01-2008, 11:18
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Getting Comfy
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Perth, Western Australia
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Re: Deep Sleep
I agree re the brightness at the top but a gorgeous photo all the same.
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02-01-2008, 15:43
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Loves the place
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Poole, Dorset
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Re: Deep Sleep
I think a slight darkening of the bright area and then a very shallow s-curve for the rest and you've got a real winner their Sotelo, it is gorgeous! It's not a portrait type shot, it's a capture of a sweet moment and has major 'aahhhh' factor!
Lovely one and trust she (and the rest of your family) had a good Christmas and new year  Cheers, Rob |
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