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Old 08-12-2007, 15:43   #1 (permalink)
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A reworking of an old image. Have tried to apply some of the things I have learned form the tutorials here. C&C always welcome.

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Old 08-12-2007, 18:19   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Derwent Valley Dawn

wow that's a fantastic image!
Great sky and lovely mountains. Perhaps could have included a bit more foreground and a little less sky, but nothing too serious

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Old 08-12-2007, 19:30   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Derwent Valley Dawn

Thanks J. The foreground is a hedge so went for the sky instead. Comments welcome
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Ah yes I remember from your other shot. Fair enough!
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Re: Derwent Valley Dawn

I think the sky IS the image here so definitely good to keep as much of it as possible. Although I know this area is strikingly beautiful, the scenery as such is a bit too far away to show us its special character but the image here is of 'a scene' with a stunning sky and it works very well

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I think it's a gorgeous pic!!
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Re: Derwent Valley Dawn

That sky looks American not British! I need to get out into the countryside more often

I'd crop right up to your mountain and maybe stretch the base to be flat, there's a natural curve from one edge to the other that would be problematic for the suggested crop.

It is utterly beautiful, by the way.
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Old 09-12-2007, 21:19   #8 (permalink)
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Re: Derwent Valley Dawn

Thanks all.
I did this crop to fit A4 print. Now not sure myself which I prefer.



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Re: Derwent Valley Dawn

LOL MB, you think we don't get skies like that in England? I have seen beauties like that countless times. You need to get out more
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Re: Derwent Valley Dawn

P'raps its just the relentless, crushing grey I see emerge on the way to work every morning at the moment that makes it seem otherworldly
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Old 10-12-2007, 20:41   #11 (permalink)
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Re: Derwent Valley Dawn

You should have seen the sky over Skiddaw today! Also over the western fells. Snow on tops, clouds, sun, pink, yellow, grey, blue. Trouble was I was on my usual drive to day job and no time to stop.
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Re: Derwent Valley Dawn

Great American sky


very good Shot, I like the top one better
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Cheers J
Now if only I can find a way to get it to Houston HMMM
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Won't the US printers accept PayPal?
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