[fionaB]

i dont do an awful lot of these arty type shots, so thought i better practice..........

thoughts and opinions as always more than welcome



Fi

[stepheno]

Blown highlights? I don't like the inner border intruding on the subject and seeing the whole glass would be better. Nice texture on the ice.

[Larne]

I like it but my eye keeps wandering around as it's a bit confusing. I seem to keep ending up on the bit of lemon at the top where it pokes into the frame as it is quite bright. Maybe pulling out a bit as stephano suggested would allow the yellow section to become an anchor for the image.

All that aside I still like it.

[AQ]

I like the idea but do not think it has quite worked. I agree with the other coments that the over exposed top of the lemon is distracting. I think I would also like to see more of the lemon undistorted by the ice. But I guess you would have to be careful that it did not become too much like a standard advertising shot.