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| Photo Critique Discuss Ennerdale and Sky...Sun, rain, snow, whatever. Shot a lot this afternoon but this is best result. Would really like C&C ... |
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Ennerdale and Sky
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Re: Ennerdale and Sky
Overall I like it, but I would like to see a bit more of the foreground even though the sky is the main focus. Nice scene and colour. Thanks
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Re: Ennerdale and Sky
Thanks Rosegold. Have a shed-load of images from here, with or without foreground. Still working on them.
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Re: Ennerdale and Sky
Agree with Rosegold, more fg would be better depending if you could find suitable fg subject
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Re: Ennerdale and Sky
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Re: Ennerdale and Sky
First one looks like the camera slipped while you were taking the shot
![]() I like the 2nd one, and I think you've done the HDR treatment very well There's too much sky IMO, and I'd crop it down to just above the top of the main mountain. This 2nd shot has good composition, colours, detail, exposure, and DoF. Nice one Roger ![]() |
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Re: Ennerdale and Sky
Thanks Charlotte. You were not far wrong with the first shot. Experimenting with angle to get major sky and small land. We took a saturday afternoon to take advantage of the weather
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Really like the new version
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Re: Ennerdale and Sky
New version is great and I like your HDR which is not overcooked. |
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Re: Ennerdale and Sky
I like both of these but agree the first one needs a touch more FG. I like the 2nd but some of the clouds are a bit burnt out. Not sure this really needed HDR treatment Roger, I think the first one is fine with the amount of FG in the 2nd
![]() Lovely composition of a beautiful scene, well done ![]() Rob |
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Re: Ennerdale and Sky
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Re: Ennerdale and Sky
Well Roger, I'm not sure how to tell you this, but this latest version looks more to me like an HDR image than your HDR version does
In your HDR version there was a lot of lost detail in both highlights + shadows (which defeats the object of HDR), whereas with this version all the detail is there!One criticism ... I don't think you should've cropped it It puts the horizon in the middle + loses a lot of that lovely cloud, which is now properly exposed in this version Well done, you got there in the end ![]() Edit: Looking at it again today, I like the crop after all ![]()
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Work Smarter, Not Harder Last edited by Charlotte : 08-05-2008 at 11:08. |
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Re: Ennerdale and Sky
beautiful place!!!!!!! is wot i'd like to say!!!!....wonder if u'd have to travel a lot to visit such place for clicking!!,or is it jsut across the block!!
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Re: Ennerdale and Sky
Thanks Sandygates. I am very lucky to live close to this place. I am sure that you have places to photo near you which will show well.
Roger ![]() |
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